My story needs help. Need to finish for school, need Ideas. Thanks :)?

MYTH
By: Naomi Beagan.
Chapter 1; Jordan
“Taxi!” Shouted the disgruntled 19 year old, On a busy New York City street. Hundreds of cars zoomed by the young man, before a yellow cab stopped in front of him. Gratefully he jumped in and told the driver, “7th Ave and W 46th ST, please.” The young man took a [...]

How the begining of my story?

After catching my boyfriend cheating on me I packed up my things and jump into my convertible and headed home.
In my rear-view mirror I could see New York City getting smaller and smaller. It is going to be a long drive home. But it will give me plenty of time to think.
I was a well [...]

What do you think of the repost of my story?

She had pressed the snooze button 16 times, was up an hour and a half later than she had intended to be up, and wanted to go back to bed. She couldn’t. Yawning, and slowly crawling out of bed, Deanna realized what time it was, and ran to her bathroom to change, do [...]